that was cool ^^
well the song was actually cool ^^ i luv the girls voice ^^ and the band was great too
but u will probably recive much more of this kind of review .. so i though... well ill give u some comments about the song..
actually ... with such a beautiful voice of that girl u should put more enphasis on her lyrics, sing higher maybe with some breaks thru the song... u know like an intro.. then the first verse with lyric powaa ( the way i like to name it ^^ยก ) then a break or maybe a riff ( actually the guitar solo was great ! keep it up^^ =) ) then a second verse maybe and after that an outro ^^
i really dont know what exactly genre u play but what I read u play a paramore song.. soo maybe hearing more song of that group or of my personal favorite of that genre Fm Static... ull see what im talkin about ^^
but for a first song that wass very very cool man (or woman XD) soo keep it up i would like to hear more of you ^^